Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Is this what's missing?

Hi Everyone, I'm finally back with something to share here on #Wipitup. I know it's been a while but I've been working hard on this new story tentatively titled Cobalt Canyon.
This scene comes into play just after Crystal breaks up with her boyfriend of 2 years. Why are they breaking up? Because he's getting ready to propose and Crystal can't commit. Why can't she commit? Because there's just something missing between her and Kevin. 
The scene below is what she would have liked to have happened between her and Kevin. 

“Is this what’s missing, Crystal?” he’d say, his voice deep, dark, intimidating, yet sexy as hell.
He wouldn’t give her a chance to answer. His lips covered her mouth like a hungry wolf, like a savage, pressing hard, nipping at her tongue, biting her lower lip and breathing hard as his large hands moved to her supple bare breasts—like hers were doing now. Whimpering softly, she squeezed them harder than she normally would, dragging the tips of her nails over the tight buds.
 Rolling a nipple between her fingers, she pulled on it, stretching the skin to the point it hurt somewhat and then pinched it hard, calling out her displeasure. Kevin ran his hand down her trembling belly—as hers was doing now—wasting no time as he plunged into the front of her lacy thong, possessively cupping the smooth lips of her pussy.
“You’re soaked.” She heard him rasp, his teeth nipping the bottom of her earlobe while his fingers delved into her wetness. “Why are you so fucking wet?” he growled, forcing two fingers deep into her aching cunt.
“I… I don’t—” she panted before he cut her off, nipping the tender flesh of her neck close to her collarbone, procuring a sudden gasp from her.
“Yes, you do.” His words were dark, his eyes smoldering with lust. “On the bed, now.” He guided her a few steps back, one hand on her shoulder, the other still between her thighs, his fingers nestled deep even as she sat on the edge of the bed before lying back. “These are coming off.” There was a sexy growl in his tone as her thong slid over the slender curve of her hips and down her legs.
Whisking away the wet panties, he helped position her feet on the edge of the bed so her knees were bent and then spread her open, gazing down at her glistening pussy. “You’re going to fuck yourself for me.” His words came as an order.
Reaching under her pillow, she soon she felt the soft velvet of  bag that housed her favorite glass dildo in her hand.
“You’re going to fuck yourself hard, Crystal.” 
The thick glass phallus felt heavy in her hand as she touched the cold tip to one of her nipples.
“Did I tell you to touch your nipples with it?” His words were harsh, more of a bark, requiring no real answer. Taking firm hold of her wrist, he leaned over her, a flash of anger in his eyes. “Do as you were told.” The rumble in those words echoed in her ears as he pushed her wrist down between her thighs, making her gasp as the cool glass head touched her clit. She wanted to rub her swollen bud with the toy, but Kevin had other plans as he guided the thick head to her silky wet entrance. “Get busy.” He gave her a wicked smile, giving the dildo a nudge, the smooth, firm head stretching her open.
The intense gleam in his eyes drove her crazy as she worked the heavy toy deeper and deeper, groaning as she yielded to its girth.
“Now take it out and suck it.” His voice dripped with an authoritative edge unlike she’d ever heard from him. He stood back, watching as she pulled it out, spreading her thighs for a better view. Never before had she desired to suck her own juices, and yet for some reason her fantasy vision of Kevin was telling her too, and damned if she didn’t obey like an obedient little slut.
She wasn’t sure what to think of the taste as she licked, and sucked. It wasn’t bad, but she wasn’t sure she’d call it good either. It didn’t matter though, because Kevin told her to do it, and the reaction it was having on him made it worth it. He still had one hand on her knee, but the other now supported the bulk of his engorged cock as he stroked it firmly from root to tip, giving the head a firm squeeze, pre-come oozing from the tiny hole.
“Put it back in your cunt,” he ordered, his voice husky with desire.
Both hands eagerly raced to her throbbing mound, holding her lips apart with one hand, she buried the phallus as deep as she could, voicing her pleasure as she clenched the unyielding glass.

Thanks for visiting today folks. I hope you all have a wonderful Hump-day visiting some of the other hot authors on this hop. 


  1. Oh my God ... so glad you're back, and what a HOT entrance! I think Kevin needs to start barking those orders! Keep it coming, please ... :)

    1. Thanks for the WB Shelly. I'm SO happy to be a participant in the hop again.
      Glad you enjoyed the excerpt. If Kevin doesn't start barking those orders, maybe she should find someone who is... more willing to give her what she needs. ;;-)
      Thanks for visiting, I always love your comments.

  2. Damn girl.I think I just drooled on myself a little.

    1. What a lovely compliment, thank you! ☺

  3. Haha! It's the week for sucking dildos... :) I have to say your glass one sounds rather more elegant than mine, though. I'm with Crystal - this is most definitely how Kevin should behave. Delightfully domineering, knows what he wants and how to get it, issuing commands left right and centre, dribble worthy dom's have my vote. I do hope Crystal gets what she's looking for.... AND WELCOME BACKKKKK. We've missed you muchly!!! xoxo

  4. Great minds think alike? I loved your shower scene with Petal. What a tease you can be, truly. Making that poor pony work so hard. LOL.
    Thanks for the Welcome back... It feels so good to be missed. ♥

  5. yummy! Such a reward after an hour or so spent working on TrueAwesome to figure things out :D This is hot and wonderful and yum :D!

    1. Awww, thanks Joelle ♥ I know how it is to familiarize yourself with new programs and platforms. I hope if you do switch your blog over that it's a smooth transition. I very much enjoyed your chat with Vala and the Queen on your blog this week. I've missed them. ☺

  6. That's a smoking hot excerpt, so it looks like your time away was well spent working on some awesomeness!

    1. You guys are starting to make me blush here. Thank you for such a lovely compliment, Tara ☺

  7. whew - excuse me a minute i have to go get a cold drink - wow - was that hot!!!!!!!!

  8. Damn! I just cooled down before i read your blog.....now i have to start all over again!