Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Shane Moore wants a Domme!


Hi Everyone, and welcome to Wip It Up. This excerpt is taken from Pleasure Bay, which is currently with the publisher and should be out soon...very soon.
To the left over there is Shane Moore. Owner of his own construction buiness from Illinois. Shane has a desire to be dominated by a strong, confident and sexy woman. 
He's a tad on the timid side so he turns to Pleasure Bay to help him find what he's looking for.

Taking one planned and determined step at a time—swaying her lush ass and hips provocatively—she crossed the distance between them. As if sensing he was about to say something, she put a finger to her lips while shaking her head slowly, and then transferred that same finger to his lips once she was close enough to stand face-to-face. “Quiet,” she whispered. Her slender hands smoothed over his chest, his shoulders, and down his back as she walked around him, looking him over. His stomach tightened, as did the fit of his jeans.
His eyes were fixated on her red nails, vibrant against the blue denim as she skillfully popped the button and worked open his pants. He wore nothing but his tight jeans. She didn’t let on if this surprised her as her warm fingers weaved between denim and skin peeling his jeans from his hips. He felt his jaw clench when she took hold of his erection, softly caressing the taut velvety skin of his shaft. A scorching jolt ran down his back as she teased the swollen head of his cock. Finding a bead of moisture, she collected it, carrying it to her parted lips. He groaned.

“Do you want to come?” she asked.

 “Yes, Mistress,” he whispered.

“Fine, but you will have to earn your reward, first.” Although soft spoken, her voice was dripping with authority—God, how it made him ache. “On your knees, boy.” She pointed to her feet and he instantly obeyed, looking up at her with eager, willing eyes. He felt her smooth hands slipping into his short sandy brown hair. Her grip tightening as she guided his face to the source of her pleasure, the smell of her arousal mixing with vinyl as she rubbed her pussy gently against his nose, driving his need to please her even higher. “Think you can make me come, boy?”

“Oh yes, Mistress. Please… let me worship your pussy,” he breathed.

She took a couple of steps back and he moaned at the loss of her nearness. Biting his lip, he watched her ease down her sleek black panties revealing the smooth shaven lips of her pussy. His eyes hungrily fixated on her satiny skin, licking his lips in hungry anticipation. After stepping out of her panties, his eyes were drawn to the wet circle that marked her arousal.

“Taste,” she ordered, scooting the discarded garment before him with the tip of her shoe. Eagerly he bent to the task, lapping at her mouth-watering essence while looking up into her eyes.

She seated herself in a comfortable chair, spreading her legs wide as she motioned him to her with the crook of her finger. He crawled to her, watching her stroke her smooth pussy. “Look, but don’t touch,” she said, parting her lips. The sight of her swollen, pink clit, glistening with moisture caused his cock to throb. His heart nearly stopped when she stroked through her wetness encircling her clit. “Lick. Slowly.” Her rich voice now husky with need.

His heart hammered hard in his chest as he licked his lips, his face inching towards the center of her arousal. With the tip of his tongue, he made one slow and determined lick, looking up into her eyes for approval.

“Yes, like that,” she breathed, moving her hands to the side of his head, pulling his face closer to her beautiful pussy.

His tongue found every crease and nerve ending, making her squirm in her seat. Her breathing became labored, as his tongue dipped lower gathering her wetness. The smell of her arousal had him near to exploding as his tongue worked tirelessly, making her moan. Her fingers curled into his hair, her grip tightening.

“Faster,” she cried.

Her milky thighs trembled against his cheeks as he pushed her higher. He felt her pussy clench as he reached deeply into her with his tongue. The need to make this woman come-apart drove him mad as he sucked, licked and nibbled. Her clit throbbed wildly as he pulled it between his lips, flicking his tongue over it rapidly, making her moan.

Her legs encircled his shoulders, pulling him in more as her hips began bucking softly against him. He could barely breathe as she smothered his face, her pussy undulating beneath his lips until her body went rigid and her raspy breathing became a shrill cry of passion. Her nails pressed into his scalp as she bucked fitfully during her powerful orgasm.

The image of her coming undone sent Shane over the edge. A deep growl filled his ears as his hot seed erupted forcefully, surging repeatedly against his belly. Opening his eyes, he looked down at the mess. When had his hand reached into his pants? Relaxing back against the couch, he let his body recover from the immense orgasm.

Looking at the array of papers scattered around him, he smiled. Eighteen thousand might seem a tad steep, but if just thinking about his fantasy woman could make him spend that hard, he could only imagine what it would be like for real at Pleasure Bay. 

Thank you all for visiting today. More on Pleasure Bay, coming soon...very soon. In the meantime don't forget to check out the other hard-working, sexy authors in this weeks Wip-Wednesday. Have something romantic or erotic of your own to share? 
Join us and show off a WIP of your own. ヅ   










15 comments:

  1. YUMMY! I totally missed the sign up - actually was heading over here to see if it was going!!

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  2. Thanks for visiting, Natasha. The sign up for next week will be posting soon.. very soon. Hope to see you on next weeks WIP-Wednesday ヅ

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  3. Smoldering. I've come over all hot and bothered :)

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    1. Thank you, Jaye. I read your reply wrong at first glance and thought it said you came all over. Oops! Err... not that it would be a bad thing though, right? ~smirks~
      I really enjoyed 'A moment alone' with Gemma and Jason today.

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  4. I'll be here! In the meantime, on to share your excerpt!

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    1. Thanks for visiting Dinah. I hope you decide to share something from that delicious WIP of yours I keep hearing about next week. And also, thank you for sharing ♥

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  5. Oooh, this was a HOT ONE! I'm looking forward to Pleasure Bay ... and nice pic, by the way. ;)

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    1. Thanks Shelly. I got a bit worked up over your share this morning too. I had to make myself an omelet. ~Giggles~ ヅ

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  7. Mm, mm, mm. The guns on that image of Shane are to die for! It was awesome working with you, Melody. Can't wait to get a release date for this one. Dang, I hate waiting . I've got to remember to sign up for next week.

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    1. Whoot! I love the image of Shane ♥ and what he does in Pleasure Bay... even better!
      It was great working with you too, Maddie. I miss our end of week collaborations. It was fun. Hope we can do it again :-)
      I'd be great to have you here next week... I set a goal for at least 10 participants!

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  8. oh I love this, I was delightfully surprised at the end to find this was his fantasy. I can't wait for this book to come out :)

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    1. Thank you, Joelle. I'm excited for this one too. The experience Shane has on Pleasure Bay is even better than he could have imagined.

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  9. Oh oh oh! Totally loved the pacing of this piece. Look but don't touch, now wait and off you go... It's rather nice seeing the male of the species get dominated too - so damn sexy. Feeling tingly all over :D

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    1. Thanks Christina :-)
      I was a little worried when I chose to write about male submission, but I think it turned out well.
      Glad you enjoyed, I really admire your work as well.

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